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Personal Worldview Paper Instructions
Last Update: 15 March 2017
Let me know if something isn’t clear and I can add information to this document. C.R.H.
Click on these if you want (if the videos below don’t play) https://youtu.be/bUb9P5YpqWI & https://youtu.be/0tp3BbBU4R4
Telos of this Project: Self-Analysis and to Plan a Course of Study
The purpose of this self-diagnostic paper is to get a grip on the current contents of your worldview, and chart out a course of future study to fix the weak spots (we all have them). You will analyze your worldview for clarity, consistency, and (epistemic) strength, and you will bounce your views off of the philosophers we read in the course (at least 6 of them). In your conclusion (at least 300 words) you will analyze your overall worldview and tell your reader how you plan to work on your worldview in the coming years. A careful, philosophical analysis of your own beliefs will reveal to you what beliefs are too vague and which beliefs lack justification and what beliefs are actually more central to your life than you realize (and so life change is required).
Since you have to bounce your views off of the positions of the philosophers we are reading, you will be more engaged with the texts. Hopefully, the famous philosophers we read will pique your interest and motivate you to either modify your current beliefs if you find beliefs with stronger justification (i.e. reasons to believe), or to find further justification for your current beliefs.
Instructions:
In this paper, you will briefly describe (in 5-8 pages) your worldview in the following areas: Epistemology (philosophy of knowledge), Theology (philosophy of God), Cosmology/Cosmogony (philosophy of the origins and conservation and destiny of the universe), Metaphysical Anthropology (view of the origin and powers and value of human beings and their place in the universe), Thanatology (philosophy of death), Soteriology (philosophy of salvation), and Ethics (philosophy of values and right and wrong). You must have section headings and you must have zero rhetorical questions in the paper. Students do not believe me and they end up having 200 rhetorical questions and no section headings and they can’t get an A without those structure/style points.
Clarity, Centrality, and [Epistemic] Strength
In each section, be sure to pay attention to the clarity, centrality, and strength of your views. We cannot believe vague things. Clarity has to do with how clear of a concept you have of (e.g. God). For your theology if you believe in a god explain how clear of a view of God you have. Is god personal or impersonal, is God one or a Trinity, etc. For each section of the paper you are going to explain how clear your beliefs are? If they are vague (e.g. believing in a “higher power”), please say so. That’s fine. All of us have work to do to clarify our beliefs. You are just doing a self-diagnosis here. Do some in each section, but make sure your self-diagnosis is also mentioned in the conclusion.
Centrality concerns the degree to which your life revolves around a particular belief. If you change central beliefs, then you will see a lot of your life change as a result. My belief that Dr. Pepper is the best drink in the world is not very central to my life. My belief in Jesus as the smartest person in the universe and my belief that the best way to live life is to be his apprentice is huge for me.
Strength does not mean the degree to which you are emotionally tied to a belief. Strength means the degree to which your belief is justified in the epistemic sense. How many good reasons do you have to defend your belief? If you have a lot, and you can answer most objections, then you hold a belief strongly. If you believe in the existence of things (e.g. like the Force and Midi-chlorions) just because you love Star Wars, then your belief is weak. Even if you believe with all your heart that Midi-chlorions infuse all living organisms, your belief is weak in the sense of justification (reasons to believe it).
What do YOU believe? Don’t tell us what you think you SHOULD believe.
BE SURE TO TELL YOUR READERS (i.e. me) WHAT YOU BELIEVE AND NOT WHAT YOUR MAMA OR PASTOR WANTS YOU TO SAY YOU BELIEVE. I WON’T TELL HER IF YOU ARE A HERETIC IN HER EYES! BE HONEST! Your view may change next week, but don’t worry about that. Write about your own worldview here and now and do a careful self-analysis. In some worldviews you can be killed for apostasy or kicked out of the family, so I understand the pressure from family to write what your parents want you to believe. This paper is FOR MY EYES ONLY, so I will not tell. Many students find it freeing to actually look at what they believe versus what they think they SHOULD believe.
Interact with at least five philosophers in at least four different sections of your paper. Preferably, you will interact with one or two philosophers in each section of your paper. Use short quotes to help.
To help you clarify your views, use the views of the philosophers we are reading this semester to compare (and contrast) your own. It is a good idea to work on your worldview paper all semester by sketching notes in each section. In your paper, briefly explain a position taken by a certain philosopher (use short quotes and cite properly) and explain how your own view is similar or different. This is not a paper on these philosophers, but it can help clarify our views if we compare/contrast our worldview elements with those of the big philosophers. If you have changed worldviews from your childhood, you might contrast your current views with your earlier views. This is a tool to work on clarity – we need beliefs that are not vague.
For instance, when you discuss your theology, you might explain Aristotle’s view of God and how you agree/disagree with his view. Cite the text properly. When you do your metaphysical anthropology section, you are going to say if you agree or disagree with the philosophers we read. Cite our texts. For instance, in your thanatology (philosophy of death) section, you might explain how Hinduism holds that the Samsaric cycle is real, and that all sentient (conscious) beings are trapped in an infinite cycle of birth and rebirth. Then, explain how your view is the same or different. Or, in the Epistemology (philosophy of knowledge) section, you might compare/contrast your view with the Naturalist’s epistemology of weak or strong scientism, or the problem of Maya for the Sankara school of Hinduism. Email me if you need help.
You will lose content points if you do not interact in a substantial way with our texts. Cite the texts properly and give us a page at the end with your citations. Use a web-based program or use the writing center if you need help with citing things properly.
Video of me babbling about this paper: https://youtu.be/0tp3BbBU4R4 (click on that link or below)
And an optional lecture on the worldview of Naturalism (scientific atheism): https://youtu.be/sgQBrCjxl9w
HOW TO WRITE THIS PAPER: 30 Minutes Each Week. If you wait until the end of the semester you will regret it. Students often do.
To write this paper, create a Word document and make an outline with each section headings. Each week, type up a few of your thoughts in different sections. Think about your beliefs by talking to your friends. Or, write down the different topics on note cards. Think about your beliefs when you are bored and standing in line at the store. Sketch notes. Type them up when you get home.
Since you have to interact with some the philosophers we read this semester, type up your thoughts during some of your readings. Type interesting quotes in your paper as you read our texts. It is better to have too many quotes (that you have to cut out of the final draft) than not enough.
Do not wait until the last minute. You will not do well, and you will find it difficult to find quotes from the philosophers we read in the beginning of the semester. Exchange your paper with a classmate or at least read it out loud to a friend to see if s/he has additional questions about your views.
Outline of Paper: Use headings for each section to make it easier to read.
*Use these questions ONLY as guides to get you thinking about how to write on these topics. Given your course, you may or may not have studied the things I mention below You may only want to quote one of our philosophers and jump into where you agree and disagree. Use the bullet points as possible prompts to writing. Write in full, well-developed paragraphs—do not simply answer these questions.
INTRODUCTION: Give a quick autobiographical blurb about your worldview journey. Tell us, for example, how you moved from Buddhism to Christianity to Islam and now you are a Scientologist. Tell us as much as you want in this section.
- Nota bene: If you submit this paper to the book project, I’ll expect you to add a lot of content to this section, but it isn’t necessary for your graded paper.
I EPISTEMOLOGY: Explain how you rank different sources of knowledge in full paragraphs.
- Rank the types of knowledge in your mind: philosophical, moral, scientific, testimonial, historical, perceptual, spiritual, intuition, etc. Do you know the contents of your own mind (beliefs, thoughts, sensations, desires, willings) more than anything else? Do you trust your memories? Do you know the philosophical presuppositions behind science more than what science delivers? Does your conscience tell you fundamental moral truths are more justified than scientific theories? Does science deliver the best type of knowledge, or intuition, or maybe some source of Divine revelation yield this? How much science do you know and can you trust the testimony of scientists? Does the meditation experience of your own or from spiritual leaders (e.g. the Buddha) and their testimony give you knowledge?
- If there is a Personal God who designed human faculties to do science and use reason, it is much easier to justify science as a truth-gathering discipline than on Naturalism where science is just a fluke and we have way over-evolved.
- Naturalist at M.I.T.: “It is amazing that humans can study quantum physics and discover the Big Bang Theory is true when we are just monkeys that should just be finding better bananas to eat.”)
- HINT: Philosophy is more basic than science because science relies upon at least ten controversial philosophical presuppositions to be a truth-finding discipline: (1) Existence of numbers and logic (denied by most Naturalists and Hindus and Buddhists); (2) Existence of a theory-independent external world (denied by many Hindus and Buddhists; (3) Senses are reliable truth-gatherers (difficult to justify on Naturalism and Hinduism and Buddhism); (4) Reliability of reason and the possibility of induction (denied by many Naturalists); (5) Stability and uniformity of nature from moment-to-moment and throughout the universe; (6) Adequacy of language to describe nature (we might be two-year-olds trying to describe an NFL game or a quantum-physics book); (7) Etc. Science doesn’t tell us ANY of these philosophical presuppositions are true at all—so, philosophers can always pulls rank on scientists in this respect.
- Or, do you have to taste it, touch it, smell it, or see it yourself to count something as knowledge (i.e. are you an empiricist)? Given your epistemology, are you open to the possibility of divine revelation from God (through prophets or an incarnation like Jesus or Krishna) or revelation from an enlightened being like the Buddha? Explain.
- Empiricists: Remember that strict empiricism is self-refuting, since you cannot taste, touch, or smell, or see that the philosophical claim of empiricism is true. There are many truths you cannot prove, empirically, like that the past actually happened or that you are not stuck in a virtual reality machine like Keanu Reeves in The Matrix. Be aware of these philosophical assumptions we cannot prove at all.
- If you studied it, you can explain if you are a rationalist, empiricist, Kantian, skeptic, postmodernist, fideist, evidentialist, or a fan of Alvin Plantinga’s view of Properly Basic Beliefs and bounce your views off of the philosophers we studied and let us know where you agree and disagree. Cite properly.
- Do you believe in the possibility of getting information from God through nature and life itself (a.k.a. General Revelation), or the possibility of special information (Special Revelation) through prophets and, perhaps, God showing up as a person (viz. Jesus)?
II. THEOLOGY: Describe your view of God or the gods as clearly as possible taking note of how clear/vague, how central, and the epistemic strength (i.e. how many good reasons you have to believe what you do) for your theology.
- Do you think gods exist? If so, what are these gods (or God) like?
- Is God personal or impersonal? In other words, does this God care about humans and listen to prayers, or is S/He distant (as Aristotle and the Deists thought) and unaware of our existence? Are we part of God? Is the external world real or an illusion?
- If God exists, does God love unconditionally or conditionally? The God Jesus revealed loves sinners (Jesus hung out with the unclean—the prostitutes, the drunks, the hated tax collectors to show that God loves sinners). The God revealed in Islam does not love sinners or unbelievers (God’s love is conditional to those who love Him).
- In this section, be sure to compare/contrast your view with that of another philosopher and his/her theology/worldview. Quote and cite properly.
- In this section, use Dawkins scale or Chisholm’s scale.
- How central is your theology to your life? William Lane Craig argues everything hangs on this question and so “apatheism” is irrational in light of the implications of atheism. What do you think?
- If it helps clarify your view, give an example of a theological view of a philosopher we read (theist, atheist, polytheist, etc.) and explain how your view is similar/dissimilar.
III. COSMOLOGY & COSMOGONY: When did the universe begin? What keeps it in existence? What caused the universe to exist or was there no cause? Does it continue to exist without explanation?
· These beliefs usually are not as clear, central, or strong for people, but be sure to cover those elements of your beliefs.
- Is the universe eternal (steady-state theory) or did it have a beginning? If it had a beginning, was it created by a person? Universe? Multi-verse?
- Did God start the Big Bang or did the Big Bang happen without a “Banger”? Or, is the universe eternal and uncreated by the gods?
- Do you believe in a “Big Bang Machine” cranking out universes, or believe in an inflationary theory that spins off universes? If it helps, describe and compare/contrast your view with the view of Hindus, Buddhists, Sikhs, Jews, Naturalists, Jews, Christians, etc. if you want.
IV. METAPHYSICAL ANTHROPOLOGY: Origins and reality of what human organisms are. Are your beliefs clear/vague, central, and strong? Explain in this section.
- Was Darwin right about our origins? Did aliens seed the earth so humans evolved? Did God use evolution to create us, or did God use a form of special creation to create us?
- Are humans only made of matter or do they have non-physical minds or souls with the non-natural (a.k.a. supernatural) powers of free will and reason and the ability to discover good/evil and right/wrong? The power to discover beauty and comprehend music and other things? Or, enter into real relationships of love or friendship (without it being reduced to a story of “the chemicals between us”?
- Do you believe in minds/souls (atman) or do Buddhists and Naturalists get it right with their (bundle theory) view of no self (anatman)?
- Are they inherently (or truly) valuable (b/c they are made in God’s image, or because they reason), or are they just instrumentally valuable (and we make invent this value in a constitution)?
- Are humans the kinds of things that could live after death? Do humans have the supernatural power of free will (libertarian agency), or are they determined by the laws of nature. Compare/contrast your view with another worldview in your answer.
- J.P. Moreland is a Christian philosopher who thinks Naturalism (scientific atheism) has obviously failed to show humans are just parts of nature like rivers, rocks, and lava flows. Moreland argues that if it is true that humans were created in the image of God (as stated in Genesis), then there ought to be things about us that are unexplained by the hard sciences: the existence of consciousness and the Self or “I”, the power of free will (libertarian agency), the power to discover beauty, the power to enter into relationships (love, friendship) with others; the power to discover good and evil; the inherent value of humans; etc. Do you think, from what you know about yourself, that chemistry and physics and future neuroscience will never explain the amazing features of human beings, or will Naturalists be able to show all of these things are illusions with a reductive explanation in molecular neurobiology? https://youtu.be/9c-cjYaey60
V. THANATOLOGY (Philosophy of Death): What happens to humans after they die?
- Do they vanish? Are they reincarnated? Is there a samsaric cycle of birth and death, or just one life to live? Is there a heaven or hell or Purgatory or “Outer Darkness”?
- Or, if we are Jedi, do we turn into energy ghosts and play Bodhisattva to other Jedi like Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan and Yoda? Compare/contrast your view with another worldview’s position. Quote a philosopher and tell us how much you agree and disagree.
VI. SOTERIOLOGY (Philosophy of Salvation): How clear, how central, and how strong are your beliefs in this area?
- Do humans need to be saved from something (Hell or the Samsaric cycle (Hindus and Buddhists), the Outer Darkness, etc.)? If so, how do they get salvation?
- Can God just forgive (as He does on Islam) or does God require an atonement (Christianity)? Faith in the atoning work of Jesus on the Cross? Good karma? The Amithaba Buddha? Christianity is one of the rare religions where there is a faith-based salvation through grace—Jesus said we are saved by faith and not by doing good deeds (As most other religions hold).
- Practicing the five pillars of Islam? Following the LDS Law of Eternal Progression? Explain and compare/contrast with the view of another worldview.
- Realize that a lot of people assume God is a God of grace, yet many worldviews do not think this about God. Do you base your knowledge on hunches about God or from special revelation from Jesus or prophets?
VII. ETHICS: Study of the Good (Values); Morality (rules of right and wrong); Character (virtues and vices) and the Good Life for humans. How clear, how central, and how strong are your ethical beliefs? Is spiritual formation through the spiritual disciplines a major part of this (as Jesus taught), or irrelevant to becoming people of good character (or something in between)?
- Most people think ethical truths (e.g. It is wrong to torture your baby brother for fun) are known with a much higher degree of certainty than any scientific truths (especially historical scientific truths like the Big Bang Theory or Darwinian evolution). You tell us.
- Is there objective/real good and evil and right and wrong? Or, is it relative or just an illusion produced by evolution into our advanced primate selves? Describe the good life. What is a good person?
- Darwin said there is no such thing as human nature—we are always changing. There is no Natural Law (as the American Founding Fathers believed and founded our country upon). What do you think? Are you with Jefferson and Aristotle, or are you with Darwin and Daniel Dennett?
- Can we choose how to live, or is that living against our nature? Why should people be moral (if God exists or if God doesn’t exist)? Let us know how your theology relates.
- Is Jesus the exemplar of the good life? Is the person who follows Jesus the good person? See Christian philosopher Dallas Willard on this www.dwillard.org if you are a Christian who never thought about it. Or, do you agree with Friedrich Nietzsche that Jesus’ ethic of taking care of the weak, widows, the poor and people in prison is the biggest lie ever told in history?
- Is the Buddha the exemplar of the good life? Is Muhammad a perfect, sinless prophet as Muslims believe? Compare/contrast your view with the ethics of another worldview or a philosopher we read this semester.
- (If you know these terms) Are you a moral nihilist, moral relativist, moral objectivist/realist? Is morality a useful illusion given to us by naturalistic evolution, or is there an objective right or wrong (e.g. it is wrong to torture babies for fun))?
VIII. POLITICAL PHILOSOPHY: Describe what degree of liberty is best for humans in light of your view of human nature. Monarchy/tyranny? Democracy? Oligarchy? Timocracy? Some other kind of Utopian society (lots in history and in philosophy to choose from)? How clear, central, and strong are your beliefs (most students start out as liberal, Marxist socialists in college and become conservative later in life).
- To what degree do you believe in liberty versus tyranny? Marx and Islamists and socialists and progressives are statists and think an all-powerful central government that taxes and controls human wealth and behavior is the key to a flourishing society. The American Framers of the Constitution and Conservatives and libertarians think individual liberty is most important and society will flourish best without a tyrannical or strong central government that is a soft tyranny. Where are you?
- Give us your view of private property (do you lean libertarian or socialist) and why this fits with your view of human nature. Do you think there should be big government control and less freedom (as Socialists and Karl Marx and some Muslims believe), or less government and more liberty and personal freedom for individual citizens (as John Locke and Jefferson and the Founding Fathers and Framers of the Constitution of the U.S.A. believed)?
- Where are you on this (rough) CONTINUUM: (100% liberty) anarchy àlibertarian àconservativeàsocialist àcommunist or theocracy à (100% tyranny and zero liberty).
- What is your view of social justice? Should government own all property and redistribute to individuals as they need (as Karl Marx believed), or should charity be conducted by individuals, churches, and non-profits only (as libertarians believe), or a mixture of some redistribution of wealth by government and private individuals. To what degree (if at all) are your rights violated if government gives your money away for you (versus your own choice)?
IX. EXISTENTIAL ISSUES: (Purpose/Meaning in Life; Despair & Absurdity of life; Alienation/Isolation; Guilt; Death; Freedom/Determinism) How do you explain these problems humans have had throughout all of history? Nota bene: You may have dealt with some of these issues earlier, so pick ones that you haven’t touched upon just yet.
- Atheists like Bertrand Russell, Albert Camus, Jean-Paul Sartre struggled with the absurdity of life without God (and immortality). See William Lane Craig’s article explaining their views: http://www.reasonablefaith.org/the-absurdity-of-life-without-god Without a personal God, there is no meaning to life other than the subjective purposes we give it, and the whole human race is just a meaningless blip in the history of the universe. Our existence is just as insignificant as bacteria on this little planet in this little solar system in this one galaxy which is one of billions. The human race will vanish someday—this is a scientific certainty. Life is absurd if there is no God and immortality.
- If we are just meat machines produced by naturalistic evolution (as Darwin believed), then there is no human nature (Aristotelian formal causes) and no way humans ought to be—nothing is wrong in the universe. Everything (Nazi gas chambers, seat belts, creating the Islamic State, etc.) is the result of natural processes. Why do we feel guilty if there is no way we ought to be (and we don’t have free will to choose otherwise, anyway)? J.P. Moreland argues that Naturalism will never explain humans completely. Who is right about that?
- Why are humans different than cows in that we can feel very alone in a crowd of 10,000 people or even alone at school in a classroom of students, or at home with our families? Kierkegaard (a Christian philosopher) said we are alienated from God and this relationship needs to be repaired through the power of God and faith.
- See the video below (or click here) for discussion of existential issues section of the paper: https://youtu.be/bUb9P5YpqWI
X. CONCLUSION/SELF-EVALUATION (1-3 pages long): Explain what beliefs in your worldview need more work to get them clarified or strengthened (epistemically). What beliefs are inconsistent or potentially inconsistent and require further study? Some atheists do not believe in God, yet they don’t see that life is, ultimately, meaningless and absurd (as atheists like Camus and Sartre and Russell argued). Many people are philosophical naturalists (scientific atheists) and they have no idea how much they are helping themselves to things that only make sense on the worldview of Personal Theism (e.g. objective morality, believe naturalistic evolution is how humans came to be, yet they believe in supernatural powers like free will and reason . . . and in non-physical things like real, metaphysical love and universal, objective non-physical properties like moral values and principles, logic and mathematics. Those things are difficult to reconcile if the only things that exist in the universe are matter and energy.
PLEASE DO A THOROUGH ANALYSIS AND SEE WHERE YOU NEED WORK: We all need work
This section will be graded heavily. If a student makes no attempt to be self-critical and believes that all of his/her views are 100% clear and 100% [epistemically] strong, then s/he will not get full content points. This “conclusion” is to set out a 5-10 year plan of study to make sure the worldview is as solid as possible. As B. Alan Wallace said, “We all bet our lives on our beliefs,” and as Socrates said, “The unexamined life is not worth living.” This project is too important.
ADVICE: You could easily write 30 pages on your worldview. Or, you may want to write a billion pages as a rough draft and then just edit it down to 8-13 pages.
AFTER THE SEMESTER IS OVER: If you want, submit the paper after the semester to be placed on my website www.christopherhammons.com and then to a book publisher in 2016 or 2017: [email protected] I do not save papers. The purpose of this is to protect your privacy if you are, for instance, a Muslim who does not agree with Islam, or a Baptist who is a closet atheist, or a Tibetan Christian, or a Jew who beliefs in the deity of Jesus Christ, etc. Some students have written numerous papers over the years because this project is so helpful.
GRADING: 100 POINTS
Content Points: 40
To get full content points, each section needs to focus on clarity, centrality, and epistemic strength. Must interact with at least 6 of the philosophers we study this semester, and if your interaction is weak, you will lose points. The conclusion needs to be a thorough analysis and might be 1-3 pages long.
Spelling and Grammar Points: 30
For every second grammar or spelling mistake, a point will be removed. Take your paper to your campus’ writing center. Have a friend proofread it. Read it out loud to yourself at least three times.
Structure and Style Points: 30
Every section needs a section heading. Write in prose form. Make good paragraphs. Don’t ramble on for pages in one big paragraph. Read your paper to yourself out loud. Read it to a friend. Make your paper flow. No rhetorical questions! Cite your sources properly with APA or MLA style. You don’t have to answer every question or point mentioned in this document. They are just guidelines to help you flesh out your views in each section. No rhetorical questions (most of you will ignore me and lose a lot of points). Add section headings. Good paragraphs. Cite properly. Use Microsoft Word’s tool or an online citation tool: http://www.easybib.com/guides/citation-guides/mla-format/how-to-cite-a-parenthetical-citations-mla/
Grading Rubric: 100 points
40 points for CONTENT
- Do you address the clarity, centrality, and strength of your beliefs in every section? If you read it out loud to someone, does your listener/reader want more information from you?
- Did you bounce your views off of at least four of the philosophers we read this semester?
- Was the conclusion a great self-analysis and a plan for study in the future?
30 points for SPELLING & GRAMMAR
30 points for Structure & Style
- No rhetorical questions
- No plagiarism. Everything cited properly (e.g. religious sources www.biblegateway.com )
- Good paragraphs. No lists. No choppy sentences.
- No need to define each term. Just jump in and give your view. Each sentence must have content—no fluff.
A = Less than three mistakes in grammar, spelling, structure, and style. No rhetorical questions. Clearly explained each philosophical view and discussed (or implied) centrality, clarity, and strength. Self-evaluation was honest and insightful in showing weaknesses in worldview.
B = More mistakes in grammar, spelling, structure, and style. Fairly thorough in explanation of worldview concepts, but often forgetting to talk about the centrality, clarity, and strength of various beliefs. Analysis in conclusion is incomplete.
OPTIONAL BOOK PROJECT:
- After the semester is over, you may submit your paper to the book project via email: [email protected] . Do it AFTER the semester is over.
- I will be putting up a blog of past student papers at www.christopherhammons.com or https://christufferhammons.wordpress.com
- Editing these in a book since this project is one that every human on this planet should do every year the rest of their natural lives 😉
2) Sample worldview paper I made up
3) Feedback to real students in my other philosophy course (they read different philosophers, so you won’t use Plato or Aristotle or Hume or Descartes so you can ignore my encouragements to find quotes by those philosophers. Adjust your reading accordingly.
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Sample of a Worldview Paper (I’m making this up)
Last Update: February 28, 2017
This paper is a mish-mash of different worldviews just to give you ideas on how to write your paper. This isn’t my story or worldview. It is a fiction.
I Introduction
I was born into a Scientologist family in La Mirada, California. My whole life I’ve been a fan of Tom Cruise and John Travolta and their testimony that Brother L. Ron Hubbard was an enlightened individual guided my life. Many of the teachings and the practice of auditing helped me grow as a person and I conquered many of my fears in elementary school as a result. I believed the core of the metaphysis of scientology and the story that we all were placed here by aliens by Xenu.
In high school, I started dating a Muslim and I decided to explore the Qur’an. I found the believe in a God that is greater than all humans and I believed the plan that following the teachings of the Prophet (PBUH) was the way to go. My study of Al-Ghazali in The Incoherence of the Philosophers showed me that God existed (through the Kalam Cosmological Argument), and I admired many of my Muslim friends in the mosque who showed me what it was to live a life submitted to God.
In college, I was convinced by a Christian friend to read the New Testament (Injil) and I started studying the ethics of Jesus and his view that God loved sinners and the prodigal and sent his son, Jesus (Isa) to show us how to live and die on the cross. I was a skeptic for a year until I studied the historical evidence behind the resurrection and I came to believe that Jesus was raised from the dead. So, I switched from believing that Jesus (Isa) was just a prophet of God into believing he was truly the Son of God and the third person of the Godhead (Trinity). I was a Christian submitted to the loving and gracious God revealed by Jesus.
When I found my wife, I was in a depressed situation and she said I should check out the teachings of the Buddha. I read the Dhammapada and studied the teachings of His Holiness the Dalai Lama and I spent three months in Dharmasala, India studying at a monastery in the Tibetan Buddhist tradition. After ten years at that monastery, I ceased to believe in God’s existence and I came to believe that the Self or “I” is an illusion and that the key to ending suffering in life was to follow the Eightfold Path and eliminate all desires until I could reach Nirvana.
One day in India, I got hit by an elephant and when I woke up I was in a hospital in Los Angeles. There, Tom Cruise came to my bedside and held my hand and read to me teachings from Dianetics. I realized that all of my searching brought me back to my original worldview of Scientology. This is what I believe today after all of my life-long pursuit of truth. I returned home to the worldview of John Travolta.
I just watched the series on television that critiques Scientology, so I have serious questions. I am not sure what I will believe tomorrow, but this is my journey.
2 Epistemology
A person’s epistemology is very central to life. What we know has an impact on all of our actions and I am no exception. After studying David Hume, I realize that I am a strict empiricist and the evidence he presented in An Enquiry Concerning Human Understanding was convincing and counterarguments by Rene Descartes and Immanuel Kant are unconvincing. My epistemology is well justified or strong since I have great reasons to believe in this philosophy of knowledge.
Hume has convinced me that if I cannot taste it, touch it, smell it, or hear it, I won’t believe it. Testimony of scientists does not impress me about man-made climate change, Darwinian evolution, or any other historical scientific theory that cannot be re-created in a laboratory. This empiricism guides my life and I ask my friends and family to produce evidence or to show me historical evidence of facts (e.g. that George Washington existed) before I believe it.
One thing I do think I know is that I have moral knowledge. I know that it is wrong to kick puppies for fun and to abuse women for sexual pleasure. On my read of things, these simple moral truths that killing innocent kids in the name of God, or beheading Christians, or selling children into sexual slavery are absolutely wrong. I am more sure that slavery and rape are wrong than I am that any scientific theory is true. My moral knowledge guides my life and is my primary source of knowledge.
I am a skeptic about religious knowledge since I cannot taste, smell, see or hear God. On my view, Hume was right on this and I think he was right about the irrationality of believing in miracles. Miracle accounts go against all of my experience of seeing dead people stay dead, so I do not think that any Christian is rational in her belief in the resurrection of Jesus (Isa).
My view is not completely consistent since moral knowledge guides my life, but it is difficult to explain my belief in right and wrong and good and evil since moral principles are not things we can see, smell, taste, or hear. This is an area I need more work in the future.
3 Theology
My view of God is most similar to that taught by Thomas Aquinas and other Christian philosophers that there is a triune God (three-in-one) that exists in an eternal relationship of love and friendship. This is expressed in the Nicene Creed as follows: “ . . . and . . . and .. . (Nicene Creed).” I have been convinced that Jesus revealed that God loves the sinner so much and came to die for them—this is a God of pure love and grace who is waiting for all of us to return to Him.
My belief is very central to my life since I serve the poor in my church every Saturday and I teach a Bible Study in my home every Monday. My view that Jesus revealed the true heart and person of God is so central to my life, that 60% of my life would be different if I became an atheist—I would change my weekend habits and my time in prayer and study of the Bible.
4 Cosmology and Cosmogony
On my view, the universe is eternal and has no beginning and no end. I think the Buddha was correct in revealing that all sentient (conscious) organisms are trapped in an endless cycle of birth and rebirth (the Samsaric Cycle) until we escape and reach Nirvana and cease consciousness. The Big Bang Theory is true because scientists created this reality by believing in it, but if enough scientists change their minds, a Steady-State theory is true. Truths of this sort are relative to the beliefs of scientists because I follow the Madhyamika School of Buddhism’s view that there is no reality to the external world—all of us are the same thing and the fact that we think we are different from each other (and the Statue of Liberty and Donald Trump’s shoes) is an illusion.
My belief in the origins of the universe is not very central to my life. If I change this view and come to believe in the multiverse or the Marvel universe of “twin earths” nothing in my daily week would change.
5 Metaphysical Anthropology
I think Darwin was right in his belief that naturalistic (atheistic) evolution is how humans came to be and explains every feature of human beings. As Democritus said 2500 years ago, “We all crawled forth from the slime, (Democritus, 223)” and Darwin modified this evolutionary theory in the 19th Century and it was further modified by the neo-Darwinists in the 20th Century. On this view, I think physicalism follows—humans do not have non-physical minds or souls as Aristotle and Thomas Aquinas thought. The argument from consciousness is not persuasive to me because I think substance dualism and property dualism are false views.
My belief in this is not very strong. I think that some of the arguments for property dualism and substance dualism are fairly strong, but I am more convinced that God doesn’t exist (thanks to the problem of evil) and convinced that Darwin was correct about our origins. I recently read, Uncommon Dissent: Intellectuals who find Darwinism Unconvincing, and reading these arguments by atheists against Darwinism has made me question things.
I am on the fence on this issue, so it is not a strong belief I hold. I could be convinced that Darwinism is false someday after further reading. Right now, the argument of consciousness does not persuade me, but I might change my mind in the future. This belief is not very central to my life since I don’t care if I evolved or if aliens planted all the phyla on the earth at the Cambrian explosion millions of years ago.
6 Thanatology
I believe that at death we face Zeus who will judge us on our good actions and bad actions and either send us to the Elysian Fields in Hades or banish us to Tartarus where we are tortured like Sisyphus.
My belief is not very strong since I only believe it because my grandma told me it is true. It is a central belief to my life, since I obey the ethics taught from Mount Olympus and revealed in Homer and Hesoid’s writings.
7 Soteriology
To be saved, one has to have faith in the love and person of Jesus Christ and receive the grace and forgiveness that was given though the Heavenly Father through his son, Jesus
This belief is very central to my life because . . .
This belief is strong because I have researched salvation on every religion and I am convinced by the evidence for the New Testament and such and such . . .
8 Ethics
….
9 Political Philosophy
I subscribe to a version of Shia Islam and I think that peace in the world will be obtained by the world submitting to the will of God as revealed by the Prophet (PBUH) and the certified Hadiths and the teachings of the clerics in Iran.
This is very central to my life and I am an activist trying to spread Shia Islam in Yemen at the moment with my brothers and I would return home and smoke weed if I didn’t believe that former President Mahmoud Ahmidenijad was correct in his worldview.
My beliefs are not very justified since I have not studied Sunni Islam and I am tempted by a lot of things the Sufis believe. I need more work to see which brand of Islam is God’s will for humans.
9 Existential Issues
Jean Paul Sartre was right in saying there is no purpose to life and that we all have to choose it ourselves. He said, “ . . . (Atheistic Existentialism is a Humanism, 244).
…
10 Conclusion .
My worldview is completely inconsistent, and I have a lot more study to do. My political philosophy follows the version of Shia Islam taught in Iran. My epistemology follows the atheist skeptic, David Hume, and my theology is that of the Pope. These cannot be consistent.
Let me explore why each of things are inconsistent . . . .
My cosmology/cosmogony is not very clear. I follow the teachings of B. Alan Wallace and Robert Thurman and His Holiness the Dalai Lama, but I don’t really understand what they are saying. I need more research on Big Bang Theory and the Multiverse before I can make my beliefs in this clearer. Thankfully, this is not a very central belief to my worldview, so I will focus on other areas before I study this one.
Many of my beliefs are not very strong, but my Thanatology is very strong. I need more study in the area of soteriology because . . . and . . . I need more work in epistemology since I haven’t read any Plato or the epistemology taught in the New Testament and by the Buddha. These things I need to remedy.
Also, . . . .
Does this help?
Okay, I’m tired of typing. Do you guys get it? Remember to focus on clarity, centrality, and strength. Bounce your views off of philosophers we have studied or the religious scriptures you believe or disagree with to clarify your view.
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Sample of a Worldview Paper (I
’
m making this up)
Last Update:
February 28, 2017
This
p
a
per is a mish
–
mash of different worldviews just to give you ideas
on how to write your
paper
. This isn
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t my story or worldview. It is a fiction.
I Introduction
I was born into a Scientologist family in La Mirada, California. My whole life I
’
ve been a fan of
Tom Cruise and John Travolta and their testimony that Brother L. Ron Hubbard was an enlightened
i
ndividual guided my life. Many of the teachings and the practice of auditing helped me grow as a
person and I conqu
ered many of my fears in elementary school as a result. I believed
t
h
e core of the
metaphysis of scientology and the story that we all were placed here by aliens by Xenu.
In high school, I started dating a Muslim and I decided to explore the
Qur
’
an.
I found the believe
in a God that is greater than all humans and I believed the plan that following the teachings of the
Prophet (PBUH) was
the
way to go. My study of Al
–
Ghazali in
The Incoherence of the Philosophers
showed me that God existed (th
rough the Kalam Cosmological Argument), and I admired many of my
Muslim friends in the mosque who showed me what it was to live a life submitted to God.
In college, I was convinced by a Christian friend to read the New Testament
(
Injil
) and I started
stu
dying the ethics of Jesus and
his
view that God loved sinners and the prodigal and sent his son, Jesus
(Isa) to show us how to live and die on the cross.
I was a skeptic for a year until I studied the historical
evidence behind the resurrection and
I came to believe that Jesus was raised from the dead. So, I
switched from believing that Jesus (Isa) was just a prophet of God into believing he was truly the Son of
God and the third person of the Godhead (Trinity). I was a
Christian submitted to the
loving and
gracious God revealed by Jesus.
When I found my wife,
I was in a depressed situation and she said I should check out the
teachings of the Buddha. I read the
Dhammapada
and
studied
the teachings of His Holiness the Dalai
Lama and I sp
ent three months in Dharmasala, I
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studying at a
monastery in the Tibetan Buddhist
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s existence and I came to believe
that the Self or
“
I
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is
an illusion and that the key to ending suffer
ing in life was to follow the Eightfold
Path and eliminate all desires until I could reach Nirvana.
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n
e
day in I
n
dia,
I got hit by an elephant and when I woke up I was in a h
ospital in Los Angeles.
There, Tom Cruise came to my bedside and held my hand and read to me teachings from
Dianetics.
I
realized that all of my searching brought me back to my original worldview of Scientology. This is what I
believe today after all of
my life
–
long pursuit of truth. I returned home to the worldview of John
Travolta.
I just watched the series on television that critiques Scientology, so I have serious questions. I
am not sure what I will believe tomorro
w, but this is my journey.
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Sample of a Worldview Paper (I’m making this up)
Last Update: February 28, 2017
This paper is a mish-mash of different worldviews just to give you ideas on how to write your
paper. This isn’t my story or worldview. It is a fiction.
I Introduction
I was born into a Scientologist family in La Mirada, California. My whole life I’ve been a fan of
Tom Cruise and John Travolta and their testimony that Brother L. Ron Hubbard was an enlightened
individual guided my life. Many of the teachings and the practice of auditing helped me grow as a
person and I conquered many of my fears in elementary school as a result. I believed the core of the
metaphysis of scientology and the story that we all were placed here by aliens by Xenu.
In high school, I started dating a Muslim and I decided to explore the Qur’an. I found the believe
in a God that is greater than all humans and I believed the plan that following the teachings of the
Prophet (PBUH) was the way to go. My study of Al-Ghazali in The Incoherence of the Philosophers
showed me that God existed (through the Kalam Cosmological Argument), and I admired many of my
Muslim friends in the mosque who showed me what it was to live a life submitted to God.
In college, I was convinced by a Christian friend to read the New Testament (Injil) and I started
studying the ethics of Jesus and his view that God loved sinners and the prodigal and sent his son, Jesus
(Isa) to show us how to live and die on the cross. I was a skeptic for a year until I studied the historical
evidence behind the resurrection and I came to believe that Jesus was raised from the dead. So, I
switched from believing that Jesus (Isa) was just a prophet of God into believing he was truly the Son of
God and the third person of the Godhead (Trinity). I was a Christian submitted to the loving and
gracious God revealed by Jesus.
When I found my wife, I was in a depressed situation and she said I should check out the
teachings of the Buddha. I read the Dhammapada and studied the teachings of His Holiness the Dalai
Lama and I spent three months in Dharmasala, India studying at a monastery in the Tibetan Buddhist
tradition. After ten years at that monastery, I ceased to believe in God’s existence and I came to believe
that the Self or “I” is an illusion and that the key to ending suffering in life was to follow the Eightfold
Path and eliminate all desires until I could reach Nirvana.
One day in India, I got hit by an elephant and when I woke up I was in a hospital in Los Angeles.
There, Tom Cruise came to my bedside and held my hand and read to me teachings from Dianetics. I
realized that all of my searching brought me back to my original worldview of Scientology. This is what I
believe today after all of my life-long pursuit of truth. I returned home to the worldview of John
Travolta.
I just watched the series on television that critiques Scientology, so I have serious questions. I
am not sure what I will believe tomorrow, but this is my journey.
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Feedback on rough, rough drafts of Worldview Papers:
Last Update: November 29, 2016
Common Issues to Fix:
a. No rhetorical questions (unless you are quoting one in Plato and Aristotle).
b. Have tender hearts for your readers who disagree with you. Avoid telling your readers it is impossible to know certain things they think they know. We all have a different epistemology and we are going to disagree. Avoid sounding arrogant. Many brilliant philosophers are going to disagree with you, and you will disagree with them. Explain your view. Some of you wrote assertions like, “The truth is nobody can know x.” You don’t want to say, “Anyone who believes in the Flying Spaghetti monster is an idiot and has lost touch with reality.” You don’t want to make your reader make a face and want to say, “Wait a minute, you can’t assert that for all of us!!!” as they read your paper.
a. You don’t want to upset Socrates and Plato and Aristotle and Karl Marx and Nietzsche in your paper. Imagine they are reading it. They won’t care if you disagree with their views, they will care if you decide the issue for them.
b. Imagine they are reading your paper and if they would be annoyed that you tell them it is impossible for them to know it is wrong to kick puppies. Instead say, “Given the evidence, I think that relativism is true and any claim that ‘x is wrong’ like ‘it is wrong to kick puppies’ is a claim about one’s own personal beliefs—there is no objective moral truth there.”
c. Or, “Since, on my epistemological view that we cannot know things that we cannot touch, taste, hear or smell, Socrates’ view that he is, primarily, a non-physical soul is false. As he explains, “. . . . . . . (4c)” is a nice hope, but I do not think humans are ever justified in believing that we are any more than wonderful creatures made only of matter and energy.”
c. Philosophy is always done before science is done. Science depends upon philosophy. Let’s talk about this (or you can just keep this and put this in your conclusion as a possible contradiction in your epistemology).
a. If you don’t believe in ten controversial philosophical beliefs, you can’t do science. You have to believe in logic, math, the existence of moral truths (don’t lie about the data), the external world has to exist, our senses have to have access to the external world, and reason has to be possible. All of those philosophical presuppositions are philosophical.
b. Also, your epistemology that says science is the best source of knowledge is a philosophical view—science doesn’t tell you science is the best source of knowledge (your philosophy does). So it is more important than science.
1) Student #1
· Great introduction. If you add to it, make good paragraphs. Avoid contractions. Not life or death but tons of them can be distracting and a little informal.
· Remember to indent paragraphs and put the book titles in italics.
· No rhetorical questions in final draft. Rewrite as statements.
You can find some verses or creeds to cite if you want to help you with your views.
· Great start. Make good paragraphs.
· You might want to find some short references to explain your view in a shorter time:
· Bible (can do a search on the site):
or
https://www.blueletterbible.org/ (which also has the Greek)
· Creeds of all Christians:
· http://christianityinview.com/creeds.html
· Catholic Catechism:
· Do you believe in the Trinity? Jesus’ divinity? Explain that. make good paragraphs.
Make sure you don’t have long paragraphs.
2) Student #2
This introduction is fantastic!
I would suggest watching the HISTORY CHANNEL ” The Bible” series. I use it when I teach World Religions It does a great job of summarizing the entire Bible in 6 hours. Shockingly good and accurate. Even if it is all false, you will know the common threads and be able to talk about those things with your Christian friends.
Watch that before reading it. And, I would start with the New Testament (Gospel of John).
So sad to hear the loss of your friend. This is the “problem of evil” and the major objection against God’s existence.
Rewrite rhetorical questions as statements.
COSMOLOGY:
This first sentence is your view, so explain that. Many Christian and Islamic philosophers disagree with you.
Many Christians and Jews and Muslims think that God used evolution and it can fit with Genesis. If you are God trying to tell people that humans are more valuable than other animals and that God created the world, you might cut out a complex theory of evolution when you explain that to Moses.
Make good paragraphs. Some of these are too long.
Aristotle argued against evolution and he never heard of Genesis. Many atheists think evolution is false, so you can’t assume evolution is true. Genesis might be false and evolution might be false. Aliens might have planted organisms on the earth.
Rewrite all of these rhetorical questions as statements.
I think there is a ton of evidence for the major truths of the Bible, so be careful of saying there is no evidence when you aren’t aware of it. Study the evidence www.reasonablefaith.org and www.rzim.org and then you can say, “I don’t find this evidence convincing.”
See that? Don’t tell Augustine and Aquinas and Isaac Newton and Galileo and Blaise Pascal and Robert Boyle that there is no evidence when they give evidence and are convinced by the evidence.
You can say, “I think the evidence is weak and Galileo and Newton are wrong in believing it to be true.”
Remember, don’t tell us what we can or cannot prove with this bald assertion. Just tell us your view. Saying these things will annoy Socrates and Nietzsche and Hume and Plato and Aquinas.
Catholicism is a species of Christianity so fix that. You mean different denominations of Christianity–all denominations of Christianity agree about the big issues. There are little issues that divide denominations, but it is still the same worldview.
Many atheists think that Darwinism is false, so be careful of saying they are dumb to think evolution is false when you haven’t studied what they have. They might be wrong, but you don’t want to offend your reader. Just tell them you think the evidence is in favor of evolution against panspermia and progressive creation or theistic evolution.
Take a history of the philosophy of science course and you will see how whole theories are thrown out every 150 years. Cut out the “lie” bit about science. Science does “lie” sometimes–we get all kinds of things wrong in science every year and every century. Just look at how it has “lied” in history over and over. Who knows what theories we will throw out in 100 years? No scientist has ever known in her time. Yet it always happens.
Nietzsche is going to say all scientists lie all the time and we cannot know any scientific truths because they come out of the mouth of people who just want grant money and dates and prestige.
So, cut a lot of this section out. Don’t cite your friend who hasn’t studied as the #1 representative of Christianity when you have guys like Augustine and Aquinas and J.P. Moreland and Ravi Zacharias to read first.
And, don’t assume that all atheists believe evolution. They don’t. Read Uncommon Dissent: Intellectuals who find Darwinism Unconvincing to see these atheist arguments against Darwinism.
Your friend needs to read Socrates and Augustine – sharp minds and tender hearts for those with whom you disagree. There is no harm in learning every religion, every view and arguments for/against every view. Explain to her John Stuart Mill’s principle. It is important for Christians who are taught the intellectual life is not important.
I would also read Acts 17 with her. Look at how Paul dealt with people that disagreed with him (the Epicurean and Stoic Greek philosophers). That might save your friendship.
Also, remember she should endorse I Peter 3:15 to be able to give a reason for the hope within her with love and respect. Christians often get defensive when they don’t know the evidence for their views, and the evidence against their views.
Remember, many Christian philosophers think God used evolution to create our bodies (e.g. Richard Swinburne is the best on this if you read EVOLUTION OF THE SOUL).
So, thin some of this out. Lots of great content to keep in this section, but some needs to be cut!
On the right track!
3) Student #2.5
Good intro, but I have some questions.
People taught you things that they thought was true–was that “forced” upon you? Science teachers do the same—they might be wrong as well. Do they “force” science on you? They might. Just be careful with this wording.
Questioning is good! Jesus, Paul, and Peter encouraged questioning and they thought you shouldn’t be a Christian if you didn’t think the evidence for it was true.
Careful of dismissing what Jesus and Augustine and Aquinas said as, “some spiritual being living in the sky telling me what to do.”
As I have argued, maybe Jesus was insane or a liar, but you can test some of his moral claims and his spiritual disciplines of moral growth and spiritual growth.
My only issue is the dismissiveness here. Since most worldviews do not say to “forgive your enemies and pray for them,” we can test that and see if it does promote moral growth. It might not and maybe we should hate and kill our enemies. But it is a testable view.
THEOLOGY:
Good! But Aristotle would say that he believed in God for 5 arguments and not because he thought God cared about humans at all. You give the Freudian and Marxist view that people invent God, but be careful–people can say that you run away from God because of these emotional needs that you have.
See that? Deconstructing (or giving psychological reasons for belief in something) is not helpful. Augustine, Socrates, Plato, and Aristotle argued for God’s existence apart from psychology and an emotional need for a God.
God might or might not exist, but there is a lot of evidence for God. Maybe that evidence isn’t convincing to you, but to say there is none other than emotional needs is something Plato and Aristotle would be a problem for them.
See that? Email me if that isn’t clear. So the soul is energy? Explain that a bit more. This is contrary to Darwinism, but you might be right. Great start! You are on the way to an A!
4) Student X
Remember that it is “deconstruction” to say that Plato and Aristotle and Socrates believed in God because it comforted them. They would disagree and say that we have rational, philosophical arguments (reasons to believe) God exists and they overwhelm the arguments that God does not exist.
Good content to work into paragraphs with quotes.
5) Student Y
Cut that first sentence and just jump into your personal story. Give more content as to what you believed as a child to now.
EPISTEMOLOGY:
Cut that first sentence, or give more content–why is it important?
THEOLOGY:
Put this personal story in the introduction. Just describe your current view here.
Is it coherent to believe in a “higher entity” and be an atheist?
Rewrite all rhetorical questions as statements.
Good! The problem is that space, time, matter, and energy came into existence at the Big Bang. Therefore it might be hard to say that aliens (who are in space, time and are made of matter and energy) could start the Big Bang.
No philosopher says that is an option. The Big Bang just happened with no explanation, or God started the Big Bang.
Souls could exist, but this is more compatible with Theism than Atheism. Mention this problem in your paper.
THANATOLOGY:
Christianity says that good works don’t get you into heaven and bad works get you into hell. Maybe you believed that, but that is not the New Testament view.
Salvation is by grace through faith (Ephesians 2:8-9) and not by good deeds as Socrates thought. You can mention that verse and say you didn’t understand the Christian view of salvation and that was your personal belief (that you now think is false).
You might be right about that view of salvation, but it isn’t Christianity.
Good stuff! Just need more quotes and philosophers to interact with.
Very good! Rewrite all rhetorical questions as statements.
6) Student Z
make a paragraph under “INTRODUCTION”
Where in Mexico? (unless it is a secret)
“C” for Catholic.
Great start on intro, but distinguish between your beliefs and “being a good Catholic”. Let me explain:
Barack Obama can believe everything in the Democrat party, but he might not push every policy the Democrats want him to believe for practical reasons.
So, we can distinguish beliefs (do you believe Christianity) from a practical reality (don’t do all the practices that make you a “great” Catholic Christian).
Make sure you make good paragraphs.
Could find a verse to defend your view in THEOLOGY section.
Remember the New Testament view of faith is TRUST IN THINGS YOU HAVE GOOD REASON TO BELIEVE ARE TRUE.
If you mean “blind faith” then explain that (blind faith is different from Jesus, Peter, Paul’s view of faith as a well-justified trust).
very, very good start! More beef and polish and conclusion and you will be fine
Good intro, but Jesus said that you don’t have to go to mass at all–there were mo masses in his day. Jesus wanted us to love God and do the spiritual disciplines (fasting, worship, prayer, fellowship, confession, service celebration, study, silence, solitude, simplicity, etc.) Mass might help with some of those things, but it isn’t 1/100 of what Jesus taught us to grow
7) Student #3
Great intro, but break it into better paragraphs when possible.
No rhetorical questions in final draft.
Be good to find some Bible verses to splatter through your paper when they illustrate your view. cite them correctly.
Is this plagiarism in the Political Philosophy section? Just use the text for Socrates.
Cite the videos if you want for pol phil.
Okay. You keep on this and clean this up and you are on right track for an A.
Great start!
8) Student #4
EXCELLENT content in intro, but make good readable paragraphs. This is a two-page paragraph. 😉
No rhetorical questions.
“evolutionize” isn’t a word 😉
Platonic dialogues in italics.
Cite Plato correctly.
Cite after you mention Socrates’ views.
spelling and grammar
The external world is an illusion? Expand on that in final draft. VERY, very interesting (many of my Buddhist friends believe this, and one of my Christian friends)!
9) Student #5
Great intro!
Epistemology:
Make better paragraphs. No huge paragraphs.
THEOLOGY
Look up that Jadakiss lyric and include it. cite it properly.
No rhetorical questions. Make good paragraphs. Tighten some of these up. You might find things to cut.
Need quotes from Plato and Aristotle.
Use the Bible if it helps.
• Bible (can do a search on the site):
or
https://www.blueletterbible.org/ (which also has the Greek)
• Creeds of all Christians:
• http://christianityinview.com/creeds.html
• Catholic Catechism:
Great start! You just need a few quotes and to clean and tighten and make good paragraphs.
Avoid too many contractions. Write some of them out.
Student #6)
Catholic is capitalized.
Also, it might hope to focus on specific beliefs that you dismiss within religion (which means worldview).
Jesus, the Buddha, Marx, Socrates, Muhammad, Aristotle, etc. all had views on God, metaphysical anthropology, and ethics. One (or none) of them may be wholly right, but they agree on some points.
You are free to disagree with all of them, but every worldview/religion has some truths in it, so to wholesale dismiss all worldviews might not be helpful.
Epistemology:
Good description! Remember to replace “religion” with “worldview”. Atheistic worldviews (Marxism, Nazism) have killed hundreds of millions more people than God-based worldviews.
Political Philosophy:
Excellent! I would make better paragraphs and thin some things out in this section, but the content is very good!
Student #7
Great intro, but tell us about your skepticism now.
Add section headings: EPISTEMOLOGY so we can follow you more easily.
Add quotes of Socrates. Socrates never saw God so you might want to modify that claim about him.
Very good start! Section headings and more quotes from our philosophers and maybe even bring in the Bible and explain where you disagree with specific verses.
Student #8
Was Catholicism “pushed” on you or “taught” to you? We might say the same of history and science and math. We might disagree with science, and history, and math, but we might not say it was “forced” on us. You be the judge.
Wow. Great personal story. Break it up into readable paragraphs.
THEOLOGY
Cut out the “as i have mentioned previously”
Lots of people have invented worldviews/religions and we can tell that many are obviously false.
Good quote of Baggini, but cite it properly.
Student #10
INTRO:
You have the intuitions of Jesus who loved all of the unlovable in his world.
Put the dialogue titles in italics. Cite it properly.
This stuff about the crazy Westboro Baptists (who do not read how Jesus loved the unloved) might be important, but I’m not quite sure what your readers would think. Up to you.
Just say (Apology, 29d) but put Apology in italics.
Can thin this section out. Cut the sentence that says, “… sometimes my thoughts wander…”
Oooh. Interesting view that science trumps moral knowledge. Does the fact that science changes every 100 years change anything? We have believed that killing innocents (like Socrates) and kicking puppies have been true for thousands of years, while science always changes.
Just a thought.
THEOLOGY:
Good! You might want to reference Bible verses if it helps you clarify your views. Up to you.
Your view is close to C.S. Lewis with people being able to leave Hell by choice to go to heaven. See his book, THE GREAT DIVORCE.

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