3 In terms of feedback, all I can really say is that the paper is not really about Yarmukian figurines!! You basically provided a list of types of Yarmukian artifacts. I was really confused by your paper. Your thesis says you are going to talk about figurines but much of the paper is not about figurines. When you do talk about figurines, you just list the types with no analysis about what the functions might have been or what it all means for our understanding of the period.